assure them that i care and that they can trust me with their pets. (17) i have always admired the way that…

assure them that i care and that they can trust me with their pets. (17) i have always admired the way that their television commercials highlight the value you place on building relationships with owners and their pets. (18) this is exactly how i run my pet - sitting business. (19) animals are my passion, and i work to make sure my customers know this. (20) i will do the same for your customers. (21) i have attached my resume, and as you will see, i have maintained a stellar grade point average during my first few semesters of high school. (22) furthermore, i serve as secretary of the sophomore class, and i volunteer weekly at our local humane society. (23) i have organized my schedule to accommodate a part - time job and have availability to work from 2:00 p.m. until closing on wednesdays, thursdays, and fridays. (24) i am also happy to work weekend shifts and additional hours in the summer. (25) i hope to have an opportunity to discuss this position with you in person. (26) please let me know if there is a time when i can come by for a formal interview. (27) i believe i would be a great asset to your pet store with my energetic attitude, contagious passion, and related experience. (28) i look forward to hearing from you. kind regards, ruby yancy 15. what change needs to be made in sentence 22? change furthermore to therefore change secretary to secretery change volunteer to volunteered change humane society to humane society clear all

assure them that i care and that they can trust me with their pets. (17) i have always admired the way that their television commercials highlight the value you place on building relationships with owners and their pets. (18) this is exactly how i run my pet - sitting business. (19) animals are my passion, and i work to make sure my customers know this. (20) i will do the same for your customers. (21) i have attached my resume, and as you will see, i have maintained a stellar grade point average during my first few semesters of high school. (22) furthermore, i serve as secretary of the sophomore class, and i volunteer weekly at our local humane society. (23) i have organized my schedule to accommodate a part - time job and have availability to work from 2:00 p.m. until closing on wednesdays, thursdays, and fridays. (24) i am also happy to work weekend shifts and additional hours in the summer. (25) i hope to have an opportunity to discuss this position with you in person. (26) please let me know if there is a time when i can come by for a formal interview. (27) i believe i would be a great asset to your pet store with my energetic attitude, contagious passion, and related experience. (28) i look forward to hearing from you. kind regards, ruby yancy 15. what change needs to be made in sentence 22? change furthermore to therefore change secretary to secretery change volunteer to volunteered change humane society to humane society clear all

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Brief Explanations:

The organization "Humane Society" is a proper - noun and should be capitalized. "Furthermore" is used correctly to add another point, "secretary" is the correct spelling, and the present - tense "volunteer" is appropriate as it describes an ongoing action.

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No change needs to be made (none of the given options are correct as the original sentence is grammatically and stylistically correct).