highlight the word or phrase that makes the thesis statement wordy. the response that ursula has to the…
highlight the word or phrase that makes the thesis statement wordy. the response that ursula has to the deaths of her eels reveals her loving nature.
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Brief Explanations:
The phrase "that Ursula has" is unnecessary as "Ursula's response" would convey the same meaning more concisely.
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that Ursula has