jessica began taking sailing lessons at a young age. (5) the watson family made the decision to lead a less…

jessica began taking sailing lessons at a young age. (5) the watson family made the decision to lead a less traditional lifestyle and moved onto a boat when jessica was eleven years old. (6) shortly after this transition, she began training extensively to become a competent sailor. (7) as her solo trip attests, her training was a success. (8) against all odds, and to the chorus of many critics, jessica set off on her solo adventure in october of 2009 on her yacht, ellas pink lady.(9) she incurred many challenges along the way that included weathering violent storms and turbulent seas. (10) jessicas boat rolled a shocking four times, but the champion sailor was able to right her ship and continue the journey. (11) jessica spent many days enjoying the solitude of a solo life at sea and surfing numerous waves. (12) she also took great care to journal her experience and to be careful about recording her own progress and pitfalls in a personal blog. (13) jessica completed her journey around the world in 210 days. (14) she came home a national hero, welcomed by the prime minister of australia, along with her family and friends. (15) for her adventurous spirit and bravery, jessica watson what is the best way to revise sentence 12 to make the language precise? a. she also diligently journaled her experience and recorded her progress and pitfalls in a personal blog. b. she also took great care to journal her experience and recorded her progress and pitfalls in a personal blog that recounted the highlights of her trip. c. she also always journaled her experience and carefully recorded her progress and pitfalls in a personal blog. d. she also took great care to journal her experience and carefully recorded her progress and pitfalls in a personal blog.

jessica began taking sailing lessons at a young age. (5) the watson family made the decision to lead a less traditional lifestyle and moved onto a boat when jessica was eleven years old. (6) shortly after this transition, she began training extensively to become a competent sailor. (7) as her solo trip attests, her training was a success. (8) against all odds, and to the chorus of many critics, jessica set off on her solo adventure in october of 2009 on her yacht, ellas pink lady.(9) she incurred many challenges along the way that included weathering violent storms and turbulent seas. (10) jessicas boat rolled a shocking four times, but the champion sailor was able to right her ship and continue the journey. (11) jessica spent many days enjoying the solitude of a solo life at sea and surfing numerous waves. (12) she also took great care to journal her experience and to be careful about recording her own progress and pitfalls in a personal blog. (13) jessica completed her journey around the world in 210 days. (14) she came home a national hero, welcomed by the prime minister of australia, along with her family and friends. (15) for her adventurous spirit and bravery, jessica watson what is the best way to revise sentence 12 to make the language precise? a. she also diligently journaled her experience and recorded her progress and pitfalls in a personal blog. b. she also took great care to journal her experience and recorded her progress and pitfalls in a personal blog that recounted the highlights of her trip. c. she also always journaled her experience and carefully recorded her progress and pitfalls in a personal blog. d. she also took great care to journal her experience and carefully recorded her progress and pitfalls in a personal blog.

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Brief Explanations:

In option A, "diligently" is a bit too general. Option C's "always" is an over - statement. Option D has redundant "took great care" and "carefully". Option B is the most precise as it clearly states what she did in the blog without over - stating or being redundant.

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B. She also took great care to journal her experience and recorded her progress and pitfalls in a personal blog that recounted the highlights of her trip.