jim thorpe wins gold 1 athlete jim thorpe participated in 17 events in the 1912 stockholm olympics, but at…

jim thorpe wins gold 1 athlete jim thorpe participated in 17 events in the 1912 stockholm olympics, but at the time he was bet - ter known as a football player. 2 in stockholm, however, thorpe became the only athlete to ever win olympic gold medals in both the pentathlon and decathlon. 3 in a 1911 championship win against harvard, thorpe played running back, defensive back, placekicker, and punter, scoring all 18 through his teams points with four field goals and a touchdown. thorpe, a sac and fox (sauk) native american, grew up in oklahoma. after the deaths of both jims twin brother and then his mother, his father sent thorpe to the carlisle indian industrial school in pennsylvania. while there, thorpe was a two - time all american for the schools football team. however, thorpe was a versatile athlete who didnt play just professional football but also 15. a. no change b. nonetheless, c. in fact, d. delete the underlined portion. 16. a. no change b. olympic gold medals, c. olympic gold, medals d. olympic, gold medals 17. a. no change b. around c. of d. from 18. which of the following sequences of sentences makes this paragraph most logical? a. no change b. 1,3,2 c. 2,1,3 d. 2,3,1 19. a. no change b. thorpe a sac and fox (sauk) native american c. thorpe a sac and fox (sauk) native american, d. thorpe, a sac and fox (sauk) native american,
Answer
Brief Explanations:
- “however” is redundant as the contrast is already clear without it. Deleting the under - lined portion makes the sentence flow better.
- “Olympic gold medals” is the correct, standard phrase without any unnecessary commas.
- “scoring all 18 of his team's points” is the correct preposition usage. “of” shows possession.
- Starting with his general athletic achievements (sentence 2), then his football performance in 1911 (sentence 3), and finally his Olympic feats (sentence 1) creates the most logical sequence.
- “Thorpe, a Sac and Fox (Sauk) Native American,” is the correct punctuation with a comma after the appositive phrase.
Answer:
- D. DELETE the underlined portion
- B. Olympic gold medals
- C. of
- D. 2, 3, 1
- A. NO CHANGE