maya has earned high grades in honors algebra and is writing a letter to her principal asking to take other…

maya has earned high grades in honors algebra and is writing a letter to her principal asking to take other honors classes. read her thesis statement, then answer the question. based on my prior grades, participating in honors classes would help me. which is the best revision of mayas thesis statement? based on my prior grades, i have earned the right to be in all honors classes i have earned high grades in honors algebra, and i would like to be in the honors classes based on my grades in honors algebra, i believe i would do well in other honors classes no change

maya has earned high grades in honors algebra and is writing a letter to her principal asking to take other honors classes. read her thesis statement, then answer the question. based on my prior grades, participating in honors classes would help me. which is the best revision of mayas thesis statement? based on my prior grades, i have earned the right to be in all honors classes i have earned high grades in honors algebra, and i would like to be in the honors classes based on my grades in honors algebra, i believe i would do well in other honors classes no change

Answer

Brief Explanations:

La tesis original de Maya es genérica. La mejor revisión es la que muestra confianza en su capacidad para rendir bien en otras clases honors basado en sus notas anteriores en honors álgebra. La opción "Based on my grades in honors algebra, I believe I would do well in other honors classes" es más específica y persuasiva.

Answer:

Based on my grades in honors algebra, I believe I would do well in other honors classes