name: maria paz dia period: 4 date: 1/12/21 embedding quotes practice directions: for each of the \dropped\…

name: maria paz dia period: 4 date: 1/12/21 embedding quotes practice directions: for each of the \dropped\ quotes below, embed the quotation into the sentence provided. you may choose any quote method that you think will work best for that question, however you may only use each method twice. you may also change the wording of the commentary; however, you must keep the original intent. 1. lisa smith makes good points in her article. \when a person works hard when he is young, it will pay off later in life.\ rewrite:____________________________________________________________________ 2. it is clear that the main character in johnsons novel is getting upset. \he slammed the door on his way out of the room\ (johnson 23). rewrite:____________________________________________________________________ 3. \after i ran the tests, it was clear that the medicine was working\. scientist dr. elijah martin discovered a new way to cure the disease. rewrite:____________________________________________________________________ 4. the turning - point in the novel happened when charlie befriended jonathan. \charlie returned home that day, pleased that he had finally found a friend.\ rewrite:____________________________________________________________________ 5. the turning - point in the novel happened when charlie befriended jonathan. \charlie returned home that day, pleased that he had finally found a friend.\ rewrite:____________________________________________________________________ 6. it was clear that samantha was irritated with her mother during their fight. \i didnt want to go talk to her, but i knew that i had to.\ rewrite:____________________________________________________________________

name: maria paz dia period: 4 date: 1/12/21 embedding quotes practice directions: for each of the \dropped\ quotes below, embed the quotation into the sentence provided. you may choose any quote method that you think will work best for that question, however you may only use each method twice. you may also change the wording of the commentary; however, you must keep the original intent. 1. lisa smith makes good points in her article. \when a person works hard when he is young, it will pay off later in life.\ rewrite:____________________________________________________________________ 2. it is clear that the main character in johnsons novel is getting upset. \he slammed the door on his way out of the room\ (johnson 23). rewrite:____________________________________________________________________ 3. \after i ran the tests, it was clear that the medicine was working\. scientist dr. elijah martin discovered a new way to cure the disease. rewrite:____________________________________________________________________ 4. the turning - point in the novel happened when charlie befriended jonathan. \charlie returned home that day, pleased that he had finally found a friend.\ rewrite:____________________________________________________________________ 5. the turning - point in the novel happened when charlie befriended jonathan. \charlie returned home that day, pleased that he had finally found a friend.\ rewrite:____________________________________________________________________ 6. it was clear that samantha was irritated with her mother during their fight. \i didnt want to go talk to her, but i knew that i had to.\ rewrite:____________________________________________________________________

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Brief Explanations:

  1. One way to embed the quote is to introduce Lisa Smith and then present her point. So, "In her article, Lisa Smith makes a good - point when she says, 'When a person works hard when he is young, it will pay off later in life.'"
  2. We can re - structure the sentence to flow better with the quote. "In Johnson's novel, it is clear that the main character is getting upset as he'slammed the door on his way out of the room' (Johnson 23)."
  3. We can start with the scientist's discovery and then add the quote. "Scientist Dr. Elijah Martin discovered a new way to cure the disease and noted, 'After I ran the tests, it was clear that the medicine was working'."
  4. We can integrate the quote more smoothly into the description of the turning - point. "The turning point in the novel occurred when Charlie befriended Jonathan, and as described, 'Charlie returned home that day, pleased that he had finally found a friend'."
  5. Similar to 4, "The turning point in the novel, when Charlie befriended Jonathan, is illustrated by the statement 'Charlie returned home that day, pleased that he had finally found a friend'."
  6. We can re - structure to make the quote fit better. "During their fight, it was clear that Samantha was irritated with her mother as she said, 'I didn't want to go talk to her, but I knew that I had to'."

Answer:

  1. In her article, Lisa Smith makes a good - point when she says, 'When a person works hard when he is young, it will pay off later in life.'
  2. In Johnson's novel, it is clear that the main character is getting upset as he'slammed the door on his way out of the room' (Johnson 23).
  3. Scientist Dr. Elijah Martin discovered a new way to cure the disease and noted, 'After I ran the tests, it was clear that the medicine was working'.
  4. The turning point in the novel occurred when Charlie befriended Jonathan, and as described, 'Charlie returned home that day, pleased that he had finally found a friend'.
  5. The turning point in the novel, when Charlie befriended Jonathan, is illustrated by the statement 'Charlie returned home that day, pleased that he had finally found a friend'.
  6. During their fight, it was clear that Samantha was irritated with her mother as she said, 'I didn't want to go talk to her, but I knew that I had to'.