original sentence: julio grew up loving art and sports and not loving school. revised sentences: 1julio grew…

original sentence: julio grew up loving art and sports and not loving school. revised sentences: 1julio grew up loving art and sports, but he didnt love school. 2when julio was young he loved art and sports, but he didnt love school. 3growing up, julio loved to paint and play soccer and didnt like school. 4though a young julio disliked school, in his free time he found great joy in painting and playing soccer. which of the revised sentences is the best revision of the original sentence? sentence 4 sentence 2 sentence 3 sentence 1
Answer
Brief Explanations:
Sentence 1 is simple and clear, maintaining original meaning without adding or changing much. Others modify structure or details more.
Answer:
D. sentence 1