which press release is more formal? on november 19, the livingston amphitheater will host area musicians…
which press release is more formal? on november 19, the livingston amphitheater will host area musicians vying for top honors in the fourth annual jam - a - thon. on nov. 19, musicians from all over town will battle it out in the fourth annual jam - a - thon, happening at the amphitheater.
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Formal language uses full - length words and proper names. The first press release uses "November" instead of "Nov." and "Livingston Amphitheater" which is more formal than the second one's "the amphitheater" and "musicians from all over town" is more general than "area musicians".
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On November 19, the Livingston Amphitheater will host area musicians vying for top honors in the fourth annual Jam - a - thon.