question 5 (10 points) retake question\na coworker is preparing to send out an email and asked you to…

question 5 (10 points) retake question\na coworker is preparing to send out an email and asked you to provide feedback. here is a copy of what they have written:\nhowdy team,\ni hope this email finds you well and in good spirits. the annual community craft fair is on february 9th, and this will be our fifth year participating! as you may or may not know, we set up an booth at the fair and sell handmade goods that are brought in by staff in order to raise money for local charities. in addition, we are asking for donations to contribute to the craft fare raffle. consider donating.\nwe needed volunteers to assist with donations, booth set up, sales and clean up. talk to marsha by february 5th if you are interested in supporting this event.\nmanagement\nidentify one area that can be improved with revision. include the original error and then demonstrate how you would improve the error.

question 5 (10 points) retake question\na coworker is preparing to send out an email and asked you to provide feedback. here is a copy of what they have written:\nhowdy team,\ni hope this email finds you well and in good spirits. the annual community craft fair is on february 9th, and this will be our fifth year participating! as you may or may not know, we set up an booth at the fair and sell handmade goods that are brought in by staff in order to raise money for local charities. in addition, we are asking for donations to contribute to the craft fare raffle. consider donating.\nwe needed volunteers to assist with donations, booth set up, sales and clean up. talk to marsha by february 5th if you are interested in supporting this event.\nmanagement\nidentify one area that can be improved with revision. include the original error and then demonstrate how you would improve the error.

Answer

Brief Explanations:

The email has a capitalization error. The month "february" should be capitalized as it is a proper noun. Also, there is a grammar error in "We needed", which should be in the present - tense "We need" since the need is ongoing.

Answer:

  • Original error: "february" not capitalized and "We needed" incorrect tense.
  • Improvement: "The annual community craft fair is on February 9th, and we need volunteers to assist with donations, booth set up, sales and clean up."