question 14 or 15\nwhich statement best evaluates the effect of adding dialogue in the second version of the…

question 14 or 15\nwhich statement best evaluates the effect of adding dialogue in the second version of the passage?\npassage 1:\nwalking slowly around the living room, i glanced behind the curtains and then playfully peeked under each couch cushion. i kept my laughter to myself when a giggle escaped from behind the couch. then i walked behind the couch. thrilled to be found, jaxon ran straight to my arms.\npassage 2:\n\ready or not, here i come!\ walking slowly around the living room, i glanced behind the curtains and then playfully peeked under each couch cushion. \wow, jaxon is such a good hider! ill never find him,\ i said aloud, trying to keep my laughter to myself. a giggle escaped from behind the couch. \i wonder if he could be hiding behind the couch.\ with that, i walked behind the couch and exclaimed, \there you are!\ thrilled to be found, jaxon jumped up and ran straight to my arms.\n\you find me,\ he squealed in delight.\na. it makes the story feel more stressful.\nb. it makes the narrators character seem immature.\nc. it makes the story seem too detailed.\nd. it makes the story feel more playful.

question 14 or 15\nwhich statement best evaluates the effect of adding dialogue in the second version of the passage?\npassage 1:\nwalking slowly around the living room, i glanced behind the curtains and then playfully peeked under each couch cushion. i kept my laughter to myself when a giggle escaped from behind the couch. then i walked behind the couch. thrilled to be found, jaxon ran straight to my arms.\npassage 2:\n\ready or not, here i come!\ walking slowly around the living room, i glanced behind the curtains and then playfully peeked under each couch cushion. \wow, jaxon is such a good hider! ill never find him,\ i said aloud, trying to keep my laughter to myself. a giggle escaped from behind the couch. \i wonder if he could be hiding behind the couch.\ with that, i walked behind the couch and exclaimed, \there you are!\ thrilled to be found, jaxon jumped up and ran straight to my arms.\n\you find me,\ he squealed in delight.\na. it makes the story feel more stressful.\nb. it makes the narrators character seem immature.\nc. it makes the story seem too detailed.\nd. it makes the story feel more playful.

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Brief Explanations:

The added dialogue includes playful phrases like "Ready or not, here I come!" and expressions of the search - like "Wow, Jaxon is such a good hider! I'll never find him." These make the story feel more light - hearted and fun.

Answer:

D. It makes the story feel more playful.