read the first sentences in dortheas personal narrative.\n1. jamie and jeremy are my next door neighbors. 2…

read the first sentences in dortheas personal narrative.\n1. jamie and jeremy are my next door neighbors. 2. they are brother and sister. 3. everyday, myself walks to school with them.\nwhat problem needs to be fixed in dortheas narrative?\n○ dorthea should identify herself as a character in her narrative.\n○ the pronoun \they\ should be replaced with the pronoun \we.\\n○ in sentence 3, dorthea should identify herself with a different pronoun.\n○ the word \everyday\ should be removed from the beginning of sentence 3.

read the first sentences in dortheas personal narrative.\n1. jamie and jeremy are my next door neighbors. 2. they are brother and sister. 3. everyday, myself walks to school with them.\nwhat problem needs to be fixed in dortheas narrative?\n○ dorthea should identify herself as a character in her narrative.\n○ the pronoun \they\ should be replaced with the pronoun \we.\\n○ in sentence 3, dorthea should identify herself with a different pronoun.\n○ the word \everyday\ should be removed from the beginning of sentence 3.

Answer

Brief Explanations:

To determine the problem in Dorthea's narrative, we analyze each option:

  • Option 1: Dorthea already uses "my" and "myself", so she is identified, eliminating this.
  • Option 2: "They" refers to Jamie and Jeremy; replacing with "we" would change meaning (she walks with them, not including them in her group action), so incorrect.
  • Option 3: In sentence 3, "myself" is a reflexive pronoun and inappropriate as the subject. A subjective pronoun like "I" should be used, so this is the problem.
  • Option 4: "Everyday" (an adjective) is incorrect here; it should be "Every day" (adverb phrase), but the main error is the pronoun, not this word's presence/removal.

Answer:

In sentence 3, Dorthea should identify herself with a different pronoun.