a i was standing near the snake exhibit during a family vacation when an employee came over. after sizing us…

a i was standing near the snake exhibit during a family vacation when an employee came over. after sizing us up, she asked if we wanted to pet a snake. b everyone except me seemed enthusiastic. 2 i dont like snakes. theyre strange, slimy - looking creatures that belong in uninhabited deserts, going along the ground or resting beneath some 1. a. no change b. over to the snake exhibit where my family and i stood. c. over, and there we were, looking at the snakes. d. over while we were standing there. 2. which choice provides the most vivid description of snakes on the floor of the desert? a. no change b. slithering through barren sand c. living in the arid dunes d. moving above the dry earth
Answer
Brief Explanations:
- For the first question, the original "came over" is the most concise and natural - sounding option. Option B is too wordy, option C is less clear, and option D is also not as direct.
- For the second question, "slithering through barren sand" uses vivid and descriptive language. "Slithering" is a very characteristic verb for snakes, and "barren sand" creates a vivid desert - like image. The other options are less vivid.
Answer:
- A. NO CHANGE
- B. slithering through barren sand