a student is writing a brief article for the school newsletter to parents about the new locker bay area at…

a student is writing a brief article for the school newsletter to parents about the new locker bay area at her school. read the draft of the article and complete the task that follows.\nthe new locker bay area that has been constructed for the juniors and seniors of willis senior high school is now being utilized during the first six weeks of school. all of the students agree that it is tons better than the space formerly allotted to them; in fact, they think it is totally spectacular. the addition of a skylight brightens the area, and the lockers themselves are painted fluorescent colors that reflect the light and create a cheerful atmosphere. the lockers are also spacious, allowing students to accommodate all of their books and belongings in them rather than stacking them precariously on top.\nsince there is more available space and lockers are better organized, students are now able to retrieve their books more speedily, eliminating much confusion and tardiness. because of these improvements, the locker bay is now an asset in both appearance and function.\nthe article contains language that is not appropriate for the audience. click on two words or phrases that are too informal for the audience.

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