you read your second paragraph again and determine how to improve your writing based on jordans feedback…

you read your second paragraph again and determine how to improve your writing based on jordans feedback. durgle goes to the enchanted forest and finds an elf who joins his adventure. the wall of trees stretched far into the sky at the edge of the enchanted forest. durgle and the elf continue to the roaring river, where they meet an ogre who also joins their adventure. the group finds a giant near the sea of stardust. which of the following sentences would add more description to the setting? the green ogre looked cranky, but his voice was friendly as he reached out his hand and said, \welcome, travelers.\ after walking for two days, the sound of rushing water filled the air, and they saw a stone bridge in the distance. the giant made of stone towered over them as he yelled in a deep voice, \hello, friends! welcome to the beach!\ the group continued their journey while they talked about their lives and the homes where they grew up.

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